The Virgin as She Was Meant to Be

by | January 11, 2014 | General | 8 comments

By Henry Corrigan (Guest Blogger)

Several weeks ago, as
often happens on the ERWA Writers discussion list, a question was
posted and soon after a debate began. The question was how to write a
scene that involved the sixty-nine position, but from a female
perspective. The author was having difficulty because he had no
actual experience with the position. (He had no experience with being
a woman either, but that’s beside the point.) He asked several
female members of the group if they could offer any insight. The
answers he received were varied and detailed, but one of them stuck
in my mind.

It was from the
incomparable Rose, and her reply didn’t so much as deal with
sixty-nine, but with writing from the woman’s point of view in
general. She lamented that today, many stories which try for the
female POV, often end up revolving around the same poorly conceived
idea: the trope of the virgin.

The story is simple. A
shy, goodhearted but burningly curious young woman decides to leave
her hometown of Virginity (Birthplace of Everyone, Ever) and move to
the exciting, but kinda scary city of Sex (Everybody Comes Here).
Wherein, on her first day in town, despite being given no outward
instruction, she somehow manages to perform an incredibly complicated
and intense…insert sex act here.

Why is this a bad idea? As
Rose put it, the story left her disappointed because she was unable
to believe in the characters. Doing something right for the first
time without instruction, especially sexually, doesn’t happen in
real life. And if a story is not at least partially based on reality,
the reader can’t connect with it.

This simple fact applies
not only in erotica but in all of literature. If science fiction goes
too far out into the black, no one wants to follow. If the
protagonist of a horror story shrugs off a wound that even a layman
knows is fatal, said layman will demand his money back.

Bypassing reality, while
expedient, comes with the cost of losing the reader’s interest.
Science fiction can go as far out as it wants to, so long as it
remembers to keep a sleeping pod open for humanity. Erotica must keep
the human element in the bedroom as well, if it wants readers to
return for more.

Because for as wonderful
and special as sex can be, it is still, at its heart, a physical act.
And like anything physical that a person tries for the first time,
they are bound to do it wrong.

Real people will gag,
cough at the wrong time, or feel ashamed when something doesn’t go
the way they imagined it. They may even hurt their partner without
meaning to. It’s distressing and humiliating, but everyone goes
through it. To pretend otherwise is like being that guy in high
school who brags about how great he was in the sack the first time
around. Everyone knows he is full of it before he even finishes

Don’t be that guy.

The impulse to skip over
the embarrassing moments may seem like the logical thing to do. When
I first started writing, I did the exact same thing. Why put in
happenings that are difficult to talk about, even years later?
Because people who’ve experienced a similar event will be able to
connect with your fictional re-imagining. The point is not to remind
readers of an embarrassing time in their lives, but to put them in
the right frame of mind to remember what came after. The moment when
they got it right.

That golden moment when
they and their lover found a rhythm or that one little spot and
suddenly…blankets got kicked off the bed, pillows were knocked
aside and two people clung to each other till they had nothing left
and all of it felt just a little bit like dying. Then they did it all

The missteps, accidents
and occasional tears were necessary because they made finally driving
each other absolutely, skin tremblingly insane worthwhile.

Readers come to erotica
because they want heat, but they stay for the heart. They don’t
just identify with characters who have foibles and make mistakes but
with the authors who create them as well. They purchase stories, tell
their friends and little by little a network of fans begins to form.

Give readers the heart,
heat, accidents and mistakes they want and they will look to you for
more. Remember, there may be a whole vast Internet out there full of
poorly written virgin stories ready to pull readers under, but if you
give them a safe port full of well written tales, they will study
oceanography to get to it if they have to. 


About the Author

Henry started writing erotica for the same reason that gets most people into trouble; Because of a girl. Several years ago he decided to turn his passion into a professional career. By day, Henry is a full-time federal employee, and by night a student working towards an MBA in healthcare. Whatever time he has left over, is devoted to family and writing. His work has been featured at and twice in the ERWA Gallery. He is currently at work on two novels. Updates and randomness can be found on twitter, @HenryCorrigan. More of his work can be found hanging in The Cave at

Lisabet Sarai

Sex and writing. I think I've always been fascinated by both. Freud was right. I definitely remember feelings that I now recognize as sexual, long before I reached puberty. I was horny before I knew what that meant. My teens and twenties I spent in a hormone-induced haze, perpetually "in love" with someone (sometimes more than one someone). I still recall the moment of enlightenment, in high school, when I realized that I could say "yes" to sexual exploration, even though society told me to say no. Despite being a shy egghead with world-class myopia who thought she was fat, I had managed to accumulate a pretty wide range of sexual experience by the time I got married. And I'm happy to report that, thanks to my husband's open mind and naughty imagination, my sexual adventures didn't end at that point! Meanwhile, I was born writing. Okay, that's a bit of an exaggeration, though according to family apocrypha, I was talking at six months. Certainly, I started writing as soon as I learned how to form the letters. I penned my first poem when I was seven. While I was in elementary school I wrote more poetry, stories, at least two plays (one about the Beatles and one about the Goldwater-Johnson presidential contest, believe it or not), and a survival manual for Martians (really). I continued to write my way through high school, college, and grad school, mostly angst-ridden poems about love and desire, although I also remember working on a ghost story/romance novel (wish I could find that now). I've written song lyrics, meeting minutes, marketing copy, software manuals, research reports, a cookbook, a self-help book, and a five hundred page dissertation. For years, I wrote erotic stories and kinky fantasies for myself and for lovers' entertainment. I never considered trying to publish my work until I picked up a copy of Portia da Costa's Black Lace classic Gemini Heat while sojourning in Istanbul. My first reaction was "Wow!". It was possibly the most arousing thing I'd ever read, intelligent, articulate, diverse and wonderfully transgressive. My second reaction was, "I'll bet I could write a book like that." I wrote the first three chapters of Raw Silk and submitted a proposal to Black Lace, almost on a lark. I was astonished when they accepted it. The book was published in April 1999, and all at once, I was an official erotic author. A lot has changed since my Black Lace days. But I still get a thrill from writing erotica. It's a never-ending challenge, trying to capture the emotional complexities of a sexual encounter. I'm far less interested in what happens to my characters' bodies than in what goes on in their heads.


  1. Lisabet Sarai

    Greetings, Henry! Thanks for being our first guest blogger.

    "Readers come to erotica because they want heat, but they stay for the heart."

    Well said. And I truly admire authors who can balance realistic, flawed characters and sexual scenarios with enough of an erotic frisson to pull in the reader. It's not an easy task.

  2. Spencer Dryden

    Well stated. I love the journey from the village of Virginity to city of Sex, funny but poignant.

  3. bwordpoet

    Thank God a sexual person noticed this. I'm tired of reading stories of us virgins being perfectly sexual in bed for the first time – its excruciatingly unrealistic, misleading and probably the cause of many of us loosing our hymens way too early. Cool blog post Henry!

    -A VERY proud virgin.

  4. RMC

    Henry, congratulations on being the first guest blogger. (You just set the bar.)

    What you've hit on here is, in my opinion, the difference between straight out stroke porn/erotica and erotic fiction/literature. When you add the flaws and foibles of characters, in sexual situations, you put human faces on and human hearts into the otherwise one- or two-dimensional characters that populate so many stories that cater solely to stroke fantasies. Not to disparage stroke fiction (goodness knows, I can't write it worth squat), but a steady diet of anything gets to be monotonous after awhile, and characters that have more depth are just more interesting on a cerebral level and easier to relate to.

    Rose 😉

  5. Henry Corrigan

    Thank you so much everyone for the encouragement and praise. I'm so very happy to hear that my post resonates so well with so many renowned writers. It was fun to write and even better to receive such wonderful reviews. Stay well and take care of yourselves, all of you.

  6. Fiona McGier

    I'm still smiling over someone else recognizing that virgins don't have screaming big O's just because someone else tied them up and beat them in the right way, or filled all of their orifices in the right way, etc.

    Men may be able to come easier as virgins because their equipment is all outside where it's easily visible and reachable. But even guys need to be taught how to relax and enjoy themselves in order to be really experience all good sex can be. For women it can take much longer. I gave away my virginity many years before I ever experienced anything with a man that equaled what I could do myself, easily and quickly, because I knew where to touch and for how long. Once I had my first multiple orgasm with a man, I was thrilled because until then I'd thought it was a myth, or that there was something wrong with me…I wasn't "doing it" right. Learning how your own body works is a big help. Being willing to make mistakes and risk embarrassment is another.

    And porn gives inexperienced men an unrealistic view of what excites women, just as some romance novels create an equally unrealistic view of how willing the average man is to talk about his emotions. That's what Joseph Gordon-Levitt was trying to illustrate in his movie Don Jon.

  7. Donna

    Excellent post, Henry. You've given yet another eloquent answer to what the difference is between erotica and porn–erotica is heat with heart. However, I've been mulling over the obvious appeal of stories of unrealistic sex over the centuries and wonder if the fantasies of the virgin having a great orgasm her first time and a man effortlessly leading her to bed and ecstasy can in fact be read as code for what never happens? That is, they are emotional as well as physical fantasies. Sex is still so cloaked in secrecy that I agree it benefits everyone to be able to read the truth. Speaking a long denied truth can be as fun as having an orgasm imo! Of course, more complicated and honest descriptions of sex don't seem to take the world's bank account by storm, but that's another topic…

  8. Henry Corrigan

    Thanks so much for reading and commenting Fiona and Donna, I'm glad to hear you both appreciated my post so much.
    Fiona, your point about romance novels creating an unrealistic expectation concerning men and their feelings is a point I'd never considered before. You are spot on, the idea is just as pervasive as the fictional idea that forms in men's minds as to what actually turns a woman on.
    Donna, I like the way you liken the trope of the virgin to emotional and physical fantasies. Some fantasies we have are hot because deep down we know there isn't even a one-in-a-million chance of them occurring.
    Thank you again both of you. Stay well and take care.

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